My new two songs

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My new two songs

Postby Riff_Lovely » Tue Dec 24, 2024 8:46 pm

Hello to All!
Here is my new two songs. First one is my song , and the second is cover of Ramones with my lyrics.
Lyrics for my song:
A thousand eyes pass by on the street, none of them are yours.
a thousand steps and on a gray road, not a single one approaches me.
REF
I'm looking for you
enchanted by your smile
i'm looking for you
I run as if in a dream
i'm looking for you
in the dark night I am enveloped
through the streets like rivers
i'm looking for you

a thousand voices surround me now not one calls my name
a thousand dreams separate us now a thousand sleepless nights
Ref



Ramones lyrics
I love her very much uuuu
i love her very much uuuu
I really love when you look at me with your eyes, then I bleat like a calf oh baby
I am confused and stupid
I am confused and stupid
Ref
I love her very much uuuu
I love her very much uuuu

Ramones
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Re: My new two songs

Postby Riff_Lovely » Tue Dec 24, 2024 8:56 pm

I wish you all a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, lots of health and happiness
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Re: My new two songs

Postby Riff_Lovely » Mon Dec 30, 2024 9:10 pm


I play with EQ little bit, maybe ti sounds little bit better
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Re: My new two songs

Postby danwilson5 » Tue Jan 07, 2025 5:42 am

Hi Riff Lovely,

Two songs! Nice way to start the new year. Trazim Te Proba3 (sorry I don't have the correct font) has a great opening riff. Really enjoyed it. I could hear everything so Eq is good.

Jako Volim Ju nice groove. Keep them coming.

Dan
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Re: My new two songs

Postby Riff_Lovely » Thu Jan 09, 2025 12:42 pm

Hi Dan! I'm glad you liked it. Somehow the song opened too aggressively for me, so I inserted this mini riff/ lick. Are you preparing any new songs? It's a real pleasure to hear your songs
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Re: My new two songs

Postby AishaWard » Tue Mar 25, 2025 5:40 am

Riff_Lovely wrote:Hello to All!
Here is my new two songs. First one is my song , and the second is cover of Ramones with my lyrics.
Lyrics for my song:
A thousand eyes pass by on the street, none of them are yours.
a thousand steps and on a gray road, not a single one approaches me.
REF
I'm looking for you
enchanted by your smile
i'm looking for you
I run as if in a dream
i'm looking for you
in the dark night I am enveloped
through the streets like rivers
i'm looking for you

a thousand voices surround me now not one calls my name
a thousand dreams separate us now a thousand sleepless nights
Ref



Ramones lyrics
I love her very much uuuu
i love her very much uuuu
I really love when you look at me with your eyes, then I bleat like a calf oh baby
I am confused and stupid
I am confused and stupid
Ref
I love her very much uuuu
I love her very much uuuu

Ramones

"A thousand eyes pass by the street, none of them are yours.
A thousand steps and on a gray road, not one approaches me."
I am very impressed by this lyric of yours. It is true, this life only gives us what we try to get, and the things that pass by only give us memories that remain. There is a very good saying, if you can't get what you love, please love what you have! :P
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